A moment in time
I heard loud laughs.
I heard water splashing.
I saw the green kayak flip over thousands of times.
I saw big rain drops drop into the blue lake.
I felt like a ice cube.
I felt my feet shiver in the deep water.
I wondered if i would ever get warm again.
I wondered if we could kayak over to the fourth yellow cone.
Sophia I read your story and it made me cold
ReplyDeleteI read your moment in time story and I imagined actually being you because it was so well written!
ReplyDeleteThe only thing I think you could have changed was switch around your two I wondered sentences.
Apart from that awesome!
Keep up the fab work:)
Your moment in time is awesome I love your fabulous words that you used.Great job!
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