Thursday, October 23, 2014

The Haunted house

THE HAUNTED HOUSE

Part 1-About them

In 1913  there were 4 children their names were Gretel, Louise, Harry and Adam.  10 days ago Their mother and father told them they were moving house’s they were so happy because they did not like their old house. Today they were moving to their new house it was far out in the woods  in the middle of nowhere.  The closest town was 568 km away it took them hours to get to the house.

Part 2 -The house    

Not long after they had arrived to the house the sign was hanging on one nail and i said “wimpy kids” and at that point the girl were not to sure about it but of course the boys were so excited they were kicking the back of the sets.  Gretel had no shoes on she step out of the car and the concert was burning her toes got red she ran around the house looking for a tap.  

FInally she found one she turned the tap on and what came out was BLOOD she was horrified  she    wondered Is this house haunted ? She ran back to her family were they were standing they were in a straight line staring at the house with different looks on their faces.  Dad opened the door it was really squeaky.  

The kids ran up to see their rooms…  Gretel ran up to a door she opened it with excitement but covered on her walls were blood she screamed so hard that the house shook a bit it was like a little earthquake. Louise went to check out her new room but when she opened the door she saw a dead body laying in the middle of the room like getel she screamed and ran out of the room back to their mum and dad.  Harry said to the girls “it won't be that bad” so he went in his room and there was a zombie laying on the ground it said “Hello little boy how are you what is your name”  and guess what?  Harry slammed the door and screamed like a girl!  He sounded terrible.  The last kids was Adam he had a look at his room and in there was 1000 rats and he fainted because he was allergic to them.

Last the Mum and dad went to look at there room with the kids (Because they were scared and for a few hours they sticked by mum and dad) They opened the door and it was fine nothing in there so Adam asked “Mummy can we sleep in your room tonight because our rooms are HAUNTED” So the first night in their new house they are spending in their mum and dad’s room Yay not.  During the night all of the kids could not sleep because they were too scared but then started to feel tired and they doozed off.  The next morning when the kids woke up the mum and dad were not there they went down the stairs but down there was….



TO BE CONTINUED

1 comment:

  1. Wow Sophia that story was amazing to read. I love the interesting sentence's in your writing. Cant wait for you to write more about it

    ReplyDelete