Friday, May 22, 2015

Camp moment in time


I was squeezing through a small dark cave surrounded by giant rocks.  Commando crawling through small gaps too. Strong gusts of winds were blowing hard against us.  I could feel the cool air run down my veins.  A drip ran down my neck. I could hear the noise of enjoyment from my class all around me.  Above me I saw a giant weta hanging from 6 legs super still.  The feeling of my feet sinking into puddles of stinky slushy mud.  I could see bat poo scattered around me in the middle of the last cave.  


  1. Wow Sophia! I love how you have used so many descriptive words. Keep up the great work!

  2. Good job keep up that hook the reader kind of thing because you are really doing it.