Friday, August 01, 2014

Retell about Das Piano


Whats the big idea?
Who- Mrs Biggs,Mr Mayor and Thomas
What- Mrs Biggs asked Mr Mayor to come see the kids sing.
Where- School and town
When- When the war was on their country against Germany in 1914 to 1918
Why- Because Thomas sneezed on Mrs biggs and snot got on her.
How- by singing god saves the king
Retell your text in your own words:
One day Thomas’s dad was going to war with some of his friends Thomas’s knuckles were red from Mrs biggs.  Thomas had invented a game called Catch the German he was playing it with his friends until Mrs biggs came along.  The boys got punished and they had to stand in front of the flag pole and sing “God save the king” ten times.  They would perform a concert so Mrs biggs went for a piano hunt.  She found a piano at Mrs Forbes house on the hill and died when she was eating her dinner.  When the concert was on the Mayor and his wife came the mayor’s nose was sweating it was a hot day.  A accident  happened Thomas sneezed and the snot went all over Mrs biggs arm.  As soon as betty was about to play the piano the Mayor came over he had an axe and he smashed the piano it was so old everyone got a fright.  He smashed the piano because it was a German piano and their country was doing the war against Germany.

1 comment:

  1. That is a pretty good retell Sophia.
    A thing you could work on for next time is your punctuation and
    work on making it more intresting.
    Other than that well done.

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